Oregon Coast Workshop Follow-Up #1

Revision of the first story is off to Denise. And now, on to story number 2.

I'll worry about the first story due for the new pinky swear after that one's done.

Edit at 21:30: It's amazing how, in the space of a couple of days, you can go from feeling that what you've written is amazing and well-written and fun, to finding it totally unreadable, a hodge-podge of incongruous bits and pieces that have no business in the same story together, and completely unfit for publication. Wow.